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Slothiticus
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immediately within the first two actual chapters this novel is surprisingly aweful. It has zero character development rushes through what little plot it has while needlessly being racist. It shows no genuine respect or care for the fiction it uses(marvel) by makeing the fiction characters act way out of their personality. If I could rate in the negatives I would this is a disgrace to all the people on this site that actually try to write decent stories.

DC: Gotham's Spider-Man

LordOrpheus

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BlindCrown
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he's speaking in simplified English not in traditional :D

CephJester:*right... But the previous sentence should have been "correct English" and not "right English".
LordOrpheus
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you dont no real art lol

Slothiticus
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If this is what you consider real art that I'm glad I dont.

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
KumaKumaDaoist
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didn't believe you but after I read it I think I need to wipe my memory It really makes the character of MCU dumb and ooc

ArslanII
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There's racism in this?

ArslanII
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Yep, there's implied racism in this.

Estrenger_HK
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Lol delete this or remake this so bad,u no can continue this novel Marvel

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
BaBaDoOk_14
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You don't know right English lol

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
LordOrpheus
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write** dummy

BaBaDoOk_14:You don't know right English lol
KumaKumaDaoist
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OMG the confidence to correct him and still be wrong

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
Silva2B
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I’m not gonna read this, was just checking reviews but I thought it was funny for someone to expect character development within 2 chapters. Not defending whether this story is bad or not since I’m not planning on reading this.

LordOrpheus
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rong*

KumaKumaDaoist:OMG the confidence to correct him and still be wrong
One_BelowAll
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you’re definitely a troll

LordOrpheus:rong*
Slothiticus
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introducing a character is apart of the characters development as it establishes a baseline to build on what I am talking about is that there was no decent baseline established the story attempted to rush head first into whatever unpleasant series of events that I believe were attempts at plot.

Silva2B:I’m not gonna read this, was just checking reviews but I thought it was funny for someone to expect character development within 2 chapters. Not defending whether this story is bad or not since I’m not planning on reading this.
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BaBaDoOk_14
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idiot

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
CephJester
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*wrong

LordOrpheus:rong*
CephJester
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*know

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol
CephJester
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*right... But the previous sentence should have been "correct English" and not "right English".

LordOrpheus:write** dummy
ArtoriaPendragon_
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You can’t even right one sentence correctly, so I doubt that it’s art

LordOrpheus:you dont no real art lol