Review Detail of AliAli2123 in Her One Smile

Item: Her One Smile
Rating: 4

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AliAli2123Lv11yrAliAli2123

great plot, and i like the chractors so far ...good job author just one thing, a little work on the sentence structure should be great but overall you are off to a great start

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thank u for your review... l'll try to work on my sentence structure more☺️☺️

1yr