Review Detail of Datguypi in JoJo x MHA: The Star

Honestly, I really wanted this to do good. But after having read 3 whole chapters, I have to give up. The premise, while not wholly unique, is something not seen often (in regards to the stand and not the isekai portion). However, the writing quality and conflicting information we're given are just so little and too much all at once. Show, don't tell. Instead of directly telling us about this rigorous training plan his mother has made for him, have him go through it while having a monologue to pass the time. Don't mention abilities he doesn't have, omit them so the audience can deduce that the character hasn't discovered them yet. Keep it simple, and please don't make unironic cringe sentences or phrases. Hyper rigorous is too cringe, say instead, An extreme training plan for a boy his age, or at least something like it. It pads out the word count while keeping it informative and non cringe inducing. Other than these nitpicks and just you getting someone to read over what you've written, you also apparently need to be more proactive with your story. An MC that isn't acting like an MC, or even living his own life is not well received by anyone.