The pacing is fine and the story is lit! I can say it has potential. With the narration so well defined and detailed, this novel sure is enjoyable to read. It only needs some slight edits and we are good to go! Keep it up! I will support you all the way! [img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap]
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