Review Detail of Nikola_Niko in Aloof Enchantress and Runaway Prince Roams the Kingdom Together

Alright Author, looks like i am the first review here. So lets stat a few good things and bad things! Good thing: The novel is in a mediveal type setting and i always say this, slow-paced story in mediveal settings are brilliant! So good job with that author. The protagonist’s and the other characters are well written! Bad Things: Typos, there aren’t but they exisy. Secondly, I think this might be something personal but in the fre chapters I read, I failed to find anything to hook me in and continue reading. Like... I didn’t find any suspense. Maybe if in the first chapter of you portraited the running boy more dynamicly with use of special moves from the mc and in the second, emhanced the scene where the mc used magic and also actually showed us the people that had set out for her, I would be more willingly to continue reading. The current novel hs nothing wrong with it! But... that’s just it, just another novel. Just another chapter, just another mc. They need to strike the heart... you know? Though don’t take my words for granted I am a noob author myself after all! Anyways, Well done author, keep working hard like this! [img=recommend][img=recommend]