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The first chapter made me sooo excited to read this, from it I could tell this was going to be a steamy story.🤭 There are a lot of clichés here in terms of plot, character design and backstory, but this novel is mostly far from predictable. 👍 There was a lot of information dump reading the first few chapters especially in the character intro chapters, I didn’t even know those existed since authors usually make readers learn about the characters as the story progress 😹 Also, I think the leads are unrealistically perfect especially Shereen, no one is that perfect and it’s kind of a turn off. The grammar is pretty good, it’s just the wording of some sentences that are a bit off. Otherwise, the story is great and mostly exciting. If Aiden follows the playboy stereotype we should be in for quite a treat 😋
When The Billionaire CEO Falls
foxyash
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Thank you💗💗 I appreciate it but I want my story to be different characters to be different everyone writes a story making female character weak one but I wanted to change that and I made Shereen my FL perfect what's the use of I write the same weak female story and male dominating her then how will my story be unique and different. I hope you got my point.
Well actually, that’s not what I meant since only a select number of novels have that weak fl dominating ml thing. What I meant was your characters seem unhuman because of how perfect they are; all humans have flaws and as far as I can see Shereen is not human 💁♀️
foxyash:Thank you💗💗 I appreciate it but I want my story to be different characters to be different everyone writes a story making female character weak one but I wanted to change that and I made Shereen my FL perfect what's the use of I write the same weak female story and male dominating her then how will my story be unique and different. I hope you got my point.
oh she has some flaws 🤣😂 it will be shown rather later it's just an intro though how she looks and how she feels about herself in later chapters there will be a lot of changes.
DollyRoma:Well actually, that’s not what I meant since only a select number of novels have that weak fl dominating ml thing. What I meant was your characters seem unhuman because of how perfect they are; all humans have flaws and as far as I can see Shereen is not human 💁♀️