Review Detail of yeetitetatious in Ascent of the Cosmic Conqueror

A review from JaffaKing since it won't post theirs: So first of all a very nice story. I like the characters. Good plot and good evolution. I don't prefer such details like it was in the first chap. I would say it was too much. But after that the flow was very good. All in all good world building and lovely characters.