the story was good MC was not a cold blooded killer he's kind to good people and a devil to his enemies the story was good his abilities were not something that just came out of air so it's good grammar was not bad it's a good fan fiction I suggest that you put image that shows appearance of MC and other oc and other objects so readers can look to it just reference
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