Item: ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS
Rating: 5

bunnyrabbitLv22yr

2022-06-14 09:48

My question really was why were there only fifteen chapters? When's the next update? hahha. Anyway, it has been a very long time since I've read a story here in WN that was done right, or at least to my liking. The narration style, the dialogue, the interaction between the characters, the suspense, the pacing, and the progression. It was so obvious that so much thought was given to making this story. The characters weren't cardboard cutouts, they have their own personality and felt like real people. Not just a character stereotype but they were written as though they were alive! Goodness! There's so many things I wanted to say but I'll end it here, I guess. Keep it up, author! I'll be following this story!

ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS

Firelorn_P_King

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Firelorn_P_KingAuthor

I really appreciate the review and thoughts you have on my work. It motivates me to write even better with each progressing chapter.

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Firelorn_P_KingAuthor

Thanks again.

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