Review Detail of Evinitive in Game of Thrones : The Northern Realms

Although this story is very good in terms of story telling/world building, there are certain areas which would benefit from improvement One of these being the dialogue, which is pretty blocky and not really lifelike- its like talking to Pathfinder in Apex or Connor in Detroit Become Human. Another thing that would benefit is the common sense, like how did the North get access to Rice (Maybe Magic? But Aryan (HP) doesn't have a wand yet so ye) or like how he says "They are katanas, lightweight and capable of cleaving a person in half", which in all honesty, is a common mistake and can be forgiven (Its just here as an example) Think that's it, other than these things, the FanFic is awesome and definitely suggest a read (should you ignore the things above)