Review Detail of anubis1650 in THE_CONQUEROR

Like the author said the English is a little bad but it's readable you can at least basically understand what they're saying and you get a couple incorrect words along the way nothing major though I will say having the system redone immediately after you introduced the system was a little confusing and annoying but overall I would say this is a pretty good story so far I cannot tell if it's going to be like most Gamers stories and crash after a couple of chapters The only real complaint I actually have so far is the chapters are very short and we really have not gotten anywhere in 14 chapters