Review Detail of XharpestPen in The Child of the Shadow

Hey guys, it's your least favorite author Xharp here just letting you know that this was actually my first attempt at writing. Yeah, I know I said it was "Stealing the Protagonist's Harem" but naw. This is actually the universe that Raine came from though and was my inspiration to start anew. Anyways, I plan on writing a lot about this universe in every new novel I post to expand, cause I'm just built different.