Review Detail of Faveryy in The Wanderer - A X-Men Crossover Fan-Fiction

This started out fantastic. Really great premise and a fairly intriguing main character. But, it seems I hit the wall that many others have been hitting in that it's just a slog to read throughThere truly is a point where too much of a good thing just ruins the rest of it, and of course by this I mean the romance. I can appreciate a good slow burn, but when damn near every chapter, or at least what seems that way, is filled with cheesy smut and corny lines of love, the whole thing gets dull real quickI'll definitely be checking out more works! In terms of grammar and initial ideas, as well as communication with the reading audience, I was particularly impressed, however as of right now, this one ain't it