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SaishoMysteriarch
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2022-03-28 16:30

honestly i was a expecting this to be a one time read that i won't open again after the first chapter with how the mc was acting but from what i have seen after there is potential in this. he may act a fool but he is logical and realistic with how he is handling things so far just try don't actually make him an idiot just for the sake of comedy you can always make him act it but alow us to see his thoughts explaining his plan or why he is doing it. the legendary mechanic did this well if you are looking for references. from chapter( 1 )through ( 5 )

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