Here is my honest review: WQ: 4/5 Reason: The author's writing quality is actually outstanding. The grammar is good and easier to understand. A couple of shifting tenses that is in need to be fixed. What I mostly bothered about is, the emotions of the other characters are not mostly portrayed. I am a bit confused and curious of their emotions since the author only mostly focuses on the MC and not the others. SoU: 5/5 Reason: The author updates daily and I think that is a good thing. SD: 5/5 Reason: I think the novel is quite good especially the pace of the novel. It wasn't too fast nor too slow and the author actually explained a lot of the plot for the readers to easily understand what is going on with the novel. Quite a good touch for hiding plot holes. Kudos to that. CD: 3/5 Reason: I give the character design 3 stars for not showing much more to the description of the MC. I know his name and his ability, but i don't know what he looks like.. Maybe a bit description of the MC would show what the kid before and after gaining some of his abilities. WB: 4/5 Reason: The background is great. I don't really much have a problem with the plot. The author really hid tons of plot holes even from the earlier chaps. Overall: 4.2/5 Reason: I was impressed by the amount of effort to make such a good plot for this novel. Just a couple of tweaks in editing the earlier chaps would be great and I am pretty sure, I will see this one at the top someday. Kudos!
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