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FrightKnight88
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wq 1 sou4 sd 3 cd 3 wb 4 the reason for such a low writing quality score is because it's written with the mc's name in quest format, so second-person where the reader is the protag, but every other sentence is written with "i" so in first person, casting aside the conflicting narrative views with no point of view changes the English is quite frankly, sub-par, easy words are misspelled causing the reading to become too frustrating I stopped reading halfway through the first chapter. All my other scores besides update stability are based on what I think of Arifureta.

Arifureta: The shield hero (Deleted)

biohazar

Liked it!

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biohazar
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sorry for that so many typos with the phone. I don't have a PC so there will be typos

FrightKnight88
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the typos don't make me nearly as frustrated as it being a second person pov type story written with the language of a first person pov

biohazar:sorry for that so many typos with the phone. I don't have a PC so there will be typos
biohazar
biohazarAutorbiohazar

I'm sorry for the mistakes I have done I just made this for fun plus I did that so I can't be charged with copying the original work. I forgot to replace you to me because its frustrating if I was talking about my self or the reader when I put me. So sorry for that so i'm just gonna revise the chapters again. Sorry for the inconvenience the readers so I'm gonna revise the chapters.