It has quite the nice flow with great usage of the MC's PoV and jumping into the history lessons that build up the world where the novel inside a novel is happening. The weird [nouns] could take some getting used to but at least they delivered their messages quite well and what kind of event they are associated to. The history and major events or phenomenas that this novel's world having their [noun] designations is quite the nice touch. Anyways, the villain in a novel trope is quite an enjoyable read to go through as comparing and contrasting the original villain's action to the "new" villain is something to look forward to.
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MÖGENIt's just what I need and the request that can let you get away with deleting messy reviews. It's their words that matter if they ever do a decent review, not the annoying star rating that fluctuate and mess my liking for order.
M4Glacier:But still why a one 🌟?
Oh! now I get it. There are a lot of chaps on your novel. I'll read it and then give a real review. Ok?
UniVerseLessOne:It's just what I need and the request that can let you get away with deleting messy reviews. It's their words that matter if they ever do a decent review, not the annoying star rating that fluctuate and mess my liking for order.
M4Glacier:Oh! now I get it. There are a lot of chaps on your novel. I'll read it and then give a real review. Ok?
It's my second review on webnovel. It's not about the trouble it's more about the fact when people stalk me when I am rich and famous. This unimpressive review will come back to haunt me.
UniVerseLessOne:Nah man. That review was already enough no need to trouble yourself with changing it.