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LiquidCallous
LiquidCallousLv31yrLiquidCallous

this was awful, the dialogue was ass, the grammer, diction, and spelling was one big wide skid stain, the description and usage of verbs had to be the worst I had ever seen, wait no the rewrite of the lord's empire, that was the worst but at least it had the benefit of being a mtl. you kept throwing around that you have 4k more words and it was more refined bollocks, it's obvious there were no proofreads and what does extra word count matter is the content isn't good

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JokerHighJack

Liked it!

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JokerHighJack
JokerHighJackAutorJokerHighJack

It went through grammarly fine

LiquidCallous
LiquidCallousLv3LiquidCallous

when he is calling for help from the goddess it's here not hear that's just one of the top of my head, I could go through it all and comment every mistake but I'm neither a editor nor kind enough to do that with Strep throat.

JokerHighJack:It went through grammarly fine