Review Detail of Flip42 in Do NOT Let The ROB Become The Dimensional Chat Group Admin!!!
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Wouldn't recommend the story for most people. Although the premise is really interesting, the execution is pretty horrible. You need a lot of knowledge about the source materials to understand what is going on. And even if you know some things you will still find your yourself wondering: "Wtf is going on!". The author uses multiple plot twists to advance the story, which feel kinda cheap and rushed and don't work for me at all. Overall a very confusing and disappointing read.
Do NOT Let The ROB Become The Dimensional Chat Group Admin!!!
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Thank you for replying. The narration and the dialogue are not a big problem. The narration is fine even if you did it the other way you mentioned. And although putting the dialogue in brackets is a bit unusual it didn't bother me much once i got used to it. My main concern is still the plot. For example, you introduce a new character yet we don't actually get to know who this character is or why he/she ist important. The "Persona 5 plotline" was especially confusing for me.
Is it the Japanese punctuations? or is it because the text and dialogues aren't linear? I thought Japanese punctuations used up too much space. so I put their narration before or after. Here's an example: 「Dialogue」 He said. He says, 「Dialogue」 So as I said, was it because the text and dialogues aren't linear? Ah, if you're talking about chapter 1, I deliberately made it like that. Simply to confuse the audience. Please give a further explanation if that's fine with you. That would be helpful.