Review Detail of DivinDragonEmperor in Child of Infinity in Omniverse

This review is as of chapter 15 So far the fanfic has a good story line and plot, however, the author seems to forget that there is such things as punctuation, there are virtually no commas at all, meaning entire chapters would just be a block of text where there is a lack of full stops, commas and paragraphs. Hopefully the author realises this and gets an editor or edits the chapters himself to fix these errors. But apart from this, great effort author!