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The writing is fantastic no errors and the story can clearly be followed amazing work author san the story is progressing quite slowly hope there will be a time skip and author pls dont add to much politics chapter over all this story has potential to become one of the best fanfic just dont drop it the mc is good he a genius inventor, fast thinking and not overly rely on his system but rely sometimes on it, his devil will be likely a electric based devil fruit its not probably going to be the rumble because enel probably would have eaten it so most likely zoan thunder bird cause the mc mentioned it before and can you make his signature weapon somekind of electric rail gun that he changes up using his devil fruit since we know it's going to be electric based also Artoria development is fantastic love her just please author san don't make this a harem the update schedule is still unknown so ill put it in 3 star for now the world background this fleshed out greatly the journey going to the academy has been fantastic.

Having Fun in One Piece With a NanoBot-System

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Liked it!

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thanks for the review ;)