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its chapter 26 and apart from his talk with death their have been 2 proper further dialogues one between harys parents and grandparents and one between snape and dumbles, the rest of this story is basically just a giant infodump, a well written info dump to be clear, but i think i speak for everyone when i say that we are ready for some plot anytime now or at least some interactions between harry and his family afterall that was the whole point of coming back wasn't it a more accurate summary: magic works like this, occlumency like this, wands work like this. the elder wand is like this, the cloak works like this, elemental magic works like this, parsel magic like this, rituals like this,magic training like this. this is basically what you get. its a story that ticks most boxes except story development for obvious reasons if you read my summory.im sure it will change in later chapters. the author has a patreon but to commit to that i need to see proper pacing and actual plot, im not paying for hp wiki fan theories

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Agreed 👍