This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments
Mohitkumar
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MÖGENI can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
Devilngle:is there Harem author?
Mohitkumar:I can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
Please don't add harem in. Friendship harem is ok, but romance harem sucks. I am liking the story so far. I would feel sad if it got ruined by harem.
Mohitkumar:I can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
I don't think it's a good idea for the mc to be able to give out the bloodline upgrades like candy. He can literally make an army of 8 star warriors with enough time which seems ridiculous. I think it should either be not possible to give out upgrades or he has to meet certain conditions or limit the amount to a certain cap on how many he can give out.
Mohitkumar:I can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
Mohitkumar:I can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
Mohitkumar:I can't say for sure now but if I decide to make it a harem then there will be only two, not more than it.I will add the harem tag to it if I make up mind. Thnx for reading till now
Bro, although I haven't read your novel till now I added it to my collection. You are also a fellow author like me inspired by the author POV and being an Indian it felt good to see a writer like you. Hope you find success and become a big writer. I will check your novel in my free time.
M4Glacier:Hi Mohit! I am also an aspiring writer. Could you please check out my novel "The Author Villain" and give some feedback. Btw Really liking your novel so far... Also please don't do a harem.