Review Detail of SHiRa155 in God's Card

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Rating: 3

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SHiRa155Lv42yrSHiRa155

I have an advice for you . Take it or leave it . Your story is too fast paced . People aren't able to connect so yea take it slow bro that's all

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Seder3214AutorSeder3214

i don't want to make 400+ chapters novel so. But ofc i can slow down a story :)

2yr

Micko_SaciLv4Micko_Saci

Please if youre writing the story slow down

2yr