The grammar is barely readable. The MC is a walking definition of Gary sue, character development sucks. There are many inconsistencies such as the bs of ‘unlocking chakra’ and the mc being a jōnin level ninja at 5, it is just too much. The author messes up a few facts from Naruto, such as the ‘yellow flash’ name origin. Additionally every interaction is forced, every single character he meets know his father and are either his enemies or close friends. And much much more.
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