Review Detail of Bwoi_Guru69 in New World Magic System in Asoiaf

So far its pretty good but some details needs to be checked again to match or fit in with the plot, also some ideas could have been improved like that 600gold&small ship for a magic artifact(manderly trident) haisssshhhh could have asked for more like plots of lands or trade agreement with house manderly since if a valyrian steel sword could go up to a million gold how much more with a magic artifact??