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I hate you author i though this was goin to be a good tensura fanfiction but no you just had to send him to Naruto like why what was the point in doing that you should honestly stop writing dropthis book and make an actual Tensura fanfiction
TENSURA: That Time I Abandoned Humanity
Door_kun
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Door_kun:well you obviously stopped reading before you get to volume two. I never lied about the tags or the title, you're just making early conclusions. A piece of advice: skip to chapter 20,then you'll understand.
Are you being serious rn? The story of tensura I've skipped so far, was approximately chapter 1—70 or so. And that's not even 18% of the whole original novel.
Cheesy_Dogs:Ya but you skipped over A ton of the plot were a lot of the parts are
You skipped the part were veldora gets eaten the part were he meets the goblins When he goes to dwargon when shizue dies when he meets the ogres when he defeats the orc lord
Door_kun:Are you being serious rn? The story of tensura I've skipped so far, was approximately chapter 1—70 or so. And that's not even 18% of the whole original novel.
My points still stand, that's not even a 20% in the whole story. What? are expecting a "fanfict" as in a retelling story with a +1?? I'd rather use Naruto world as his power development place and THEN throws him to tensura. And no, even if the Naruto part was just similar plot even with MC, It'll still happen the same because MC keeps a tab on that.
Cheesy_Dogs:You skipped the part were veldora gets eaten the part were he meets the goblins When he goes to dwargon when shizue dies when he meets the ogres when he defeats the orc lord
Door_kun:well you obviously stopped reading before you get to volume two. I never lied about the tags or the title, you're just making early conclusions. A piece of advice: skip to chapter 20,then you'll understand.
It is NOT the best arcs, from my point of veiw that is. Obviously, you haven't even read the tournament arc, Yuuki's, or the war with eastern empire. They still continue you know? And mind you, majority of the other fanficts didn't even change anything on that part of an arc. Rather the MC will replace rimuru for that story, or MC will encounter a whole another villain that doesn't have anything to do with tensura and putting aside rimuru's pov as a side character. So why bother re-writing a plot if you can change them as character development.
Cheesy_Dogs:And my point still stands that you missed most of the best arcs
I have reqd the tournament ill admit i Didnt read the other 2 arcs but still my opinion stand and you can have your opinion
Door_kun:It is NOT the best arcs, from my point of veiw that is. Obviously, you haven't even read the tournament arc, Yuuki's, or the war with eastern empire. They still continue you know? And mind you, majority of the other fanficts didn't even change anything on that part of an arc. Rather the MC will replace rimuru for that story, or MC will encounter a whole another villain that doesn't have anything to do with tensura and putting aside rimuru's pov as a side character. So why bother re-writing a plot if you can change them as character development.
Man just ignore this dude This is Webnovel You will always Find idiots like this guy here Trust me just ignore him or better yet write your fanfic at SpaceBattles Where at least The community is better and mods actually Delete annoying trolls comments
Door_kun:It is NOT the best arcs, from my point of veiw that is. Obviously, you haven't even read the tournament arc, Yuuki's, or the war with eastern empire. They still continue you know? And mind you, majority of the other fanficts didn't even change anything on that part of an arc. Rather the MC will replace rimuru for that story, or MC will encounter a whole another villain that doesn't have anything to do with tensura and putting aside rimuru's pov as a side character. So why bother re-writing a plot if you can change them as character development.