Review Detail of Alphapanda in The Cryomancer's Path

A shameless five star review from the author himself. I'm not sure if it deserves such a high score, but I am certainly trying my best and constantly striving to improve my writing. Haven't been writing for long, so I'd like to think that I still have room for improvement. If you do decide to read my novel, I'd appreciate any constructive criticism you might have for me.