Review Detail of dysplex in Rise Of A God - Marvel

Follows same cliche plot line, author can't bother to capitalize consistently, sometimes there is capitalization in one sentence and the other none. The grammar is atrocious and is practically non-existent. Author keeps on cutting in on his story. Example: "My name is kartik (yap I am taking my self in my fanfic deal with it)." Yes this is indeed a real sentence from the actual fanfic. All in all this is an awful fanfic.