Review Detail of Shaman_0 in The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life

Item: The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life
Rating: 3.6

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Shaman_0Lv12yrShaman_0

I'm a proof reader of about 5 ongoing LNs and 4 completed ones. I was quite literally just wandering around and found an interesting work. If I ignore the ton of English errors, I guess that this one's got potential. I hope that the writer doesn't drop it midway. Since this is probably the first comment, I know that it should reach the writer. Hello, Mr. Kinesis. I advise you to get a copyeditor. Those guys may ask for a lot, but the returns are worth it. Stay healthy and safe.

The Moment Which I was Waiting for my Whole Life

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kinesisAutorkinesis

Thanks a lot for this review and sorry for the errors . I wont drop this in the mid way . Thank You so Much. I really appreciate it!!!!

2yr

Shaman_0Lv1Shaman_0

I think I'll remove a half star if the update frequency is this irregular. Honestly, I suggest a two week upload frequency since this seems to be your first work. you'll soon be adapted to it but be regular 😔

2yr

Shaman_0Lv1Shaman_0

Okay, I've waited, and as expected. You dropped it. TBH, after the second third chapter, the story itself got messed up. Random plots and ultra random terms... I am doing great now, and another one of the LNs I was working with got completed this New Year's Eve. Though I gotta admit, when I returned to this story and saw just how messed up it was when I was looking for something more to do, I was really disappointed.

kinesis:Thanks a lot for this review and sorry for the errors . I wont drop this in the mid way . Thank You so Much. I really appreciate it!!!!

1yr