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Hit1903
Hit1903Lv42yr
2021-11-27 03:21

Why write something so complicated. If you had wanted him to be in essos, just had him exile for the incident where he killed kingsguard. It was all too cringey to read every bad thing happen to him as if everyone was idiot. There has never been in history of got where 1st born was declared unfit to rule on basis of appearance alone

GOT: Alexander Baratheon

Grim_1099
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21 Chs

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WebReaderPub
WebReaderPubLv14

cause in got there wasn't a baratheon born resembling a targaryen. and it is robert we are talking about

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Melshan
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Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell, Arianne Martell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

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Marshall0lee
Marshall0leeLv3

Stop trying to make fanfic, this is your second and for me you are the ultimate image of failure and disappointment.

2yr
GRAVITY
GRAVITYLv5

Too much cringe, too much forced plot, If you want to read this you better shut down your brain. .

2yr
kingbastard1999
kingbastard1999Lv1

The MC is a Cuckold, don't get me wrong, not in the sexual sense, if he were cuckold only sexually it would be acceptable, but he is a cuckold in everything, he dominates 3 free cities, has armies and is good in battle, but is humiliated for the family, he could just take power and it would end, total garbage of protagonist, besides the author didn't research about the succession laws, the eldest son is always the heir

2yr
Cardinal_Harb
Cardinal_HarbLv5

If possible, I’d give no stars at all, the MC is a retard, and everything he does, is forced, not only following canon, but doing it in the most infuriating way possible.

2yr
Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv14

First of all the mc is literally the strongest person in westeros and he controls the economy and has the magic to make anyone loyal to him. But for some reason he wants to stick to canon meaning he is always bowing down to joffery even when he gets mocked and theatened and gets hated on by his family constantly and he does nothing, he has no pride at all even though he controls everything. I think the author is a masochist.

2yr
ForTheEmperor
ForTheEmperorLv15

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Sakra95
Sakra95Lv2

The MC is extremely pathetic despite having a lot of powerful abilities. The author seems to want to follow canon despite it not making sense with the MC's power. The way he tries to keep the plot on canon track is too forced and cringy. The author will show the MC acting cool or giving some wise dialogue but the minute his parents who hate him command something he becomes a loyal dog. He even let's Joffrey insult him in front of everyone. All of this would have been OK if he was an OC with no meta knowledge but he does which makes his behavior and decisions very bad.

2yr
AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv13

Man, I've never said anything like this before you really should stop writing!!! [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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