Review Detail of UnoriginalEgg in God Of The Horde

I'll start off with the very basics. The cover is great and so is the synopsis. The synopsis itself got me pretty interested in this novel. The only real issue I have is with the writing quality. There are very few spelling flaws, but grammatical errors aren't uncommon. A few run-on sentences are the most common. Also, the first chapter is heavy in onomatopoeia, but the author made the effort to change that. The next chapter was a lot better and the chapters only continue to improve in quality. It's astonishing, really. The updates are coming out at a nice steady pace. The story isn't as developed yet as it's only in the first few chapters, but it's moving along nicely. The characters are introduced in a nice and smooth way, just like the setting. The world background is well made and the novel is quite descriptive. It drew me in and I really enjoyed how it made such a nice image in my mind. 9/10, highly recommend!