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You’ve had a great idea for the story,but it’s Clear clear that you’re A new writer,new to the English language,or both.It’s poorly written and the idea mash these two worlds together made atrocious.My suggestion is to take some classes in English language arts and try reading your story out loud To a a peer or to yourself.If you can get to the point where you can get to the end of a chapter without cringing,I gut enter you That many more people will spam you asking for more chapters ano faster updates.
Kaito Kid in the World of American Comics
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This was only translation fanfic the one who post this was translator and beside author was probably just writing this for fun or hobby,I'm in chapter 128 beside batman there are no other dc hero shown yet and a few dc villain poisonin ivy, penguin and joker ,author probably jus add penguin so mc can sell what he stole and jokers in the prison, so this is probably 80%MCU and 20%batman movie(don't worry superman was not existed in this fic)
You are asking for too much from a fan-fic platform, this author is not writing it for money or trying to make it as a profession. He is probably writing for fun and just trying some of his idea and most of the readers too just read for these ideas as long as it's not mtl level of grammar where you can't even understand what is happening most of the time it does not matter and even if he put all these efforts to fix grammar etc most people will just skip over it and will just complain about the slow release. In short It's not require on this site as most of the reader don't really care.