Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in MY BOSS WANTS ME

This novel is sooo my type..the plot is so sexy. I love CEO and secretary novels, though some are a bit cliche I love them nonetheless for the story leading up to them seducing each other then ending up with each other ☺. I had high hopes for this novel because of the plot but the novel is kind of a major let down. The synopsis was a bit confusing but I understood the plot. Grammar, spelling, capitalization and use of punctuations are all very poor. Most paragraphs simply made no sense because of the multiple errors. The story lacked a proper flow and the author messily went from scene to the next. It seemed like the author was trying to pack multiple details and events in a single paragraph. I was also very confused about the point of view of the story. The author went from third person to Emma's first person then to Ethan's first person which very much confused me. I recommend that the author read over their work before publishing get grammarly or proofreader or get an editor to help them out. Overall, the plot is golden but the novel itself is in need of major improvements. I hope the author can work on their novel and only get better and better as they write. [img=recommend]