Uuhh, can you do something about the Grammar? I like the story, it's just the Grammar that making me want to Dropped it... Uuhh... [img=exp]
Janjo24
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thanks, I will try to correct the errors, before publishing ... I'm going to study English in January, since I don't have much time, because of my work. If you find a mistake, comment in the paragraph, and I will correct it.