all I can say is, good concept but lackluster writing. The 'owner of a magical shop' troupe is interesting but the phrasing of the words and grammar pulls one out of the story I really like the concept so if you want me to edit some chaps for free hit me up on discord: Daoist RedSnow#2180
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