Item: Danmachi: Outsider's journey
Rating: 5

L_Dome1Lv41yr

2023-05-13 09:16

Well not a bad introduction i like the start and the fact that the story start way before canon. There is only a thing that i don't undarstand why not making the mc 17 years old , 27 y. old seem fine but strange... . Anyway it is too early to judge but still i liked the idea so i wanted to write a review , just a suggestion make the story realistic like skills, magic, basic stats , don't make him have sss 1300 after 2 month... . Good luck in any case.

Danmachi: Outsider's journey

futur_hop

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21 Chs

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futur_hopAuthor

Hi there! Thank you for writing the very first review, I really appreciate it! Regarding the MC, he wasn't actually introduced yet. So, please, wait a little bit :) Speaking of realism, you're right. It won't be a story about an adventurer with a cheat skill that makes him level up every couple of months. Thus, don't worry about that as well :) I hope you will enjoy reading the new chapters to come!

1yr

ThreshGasmLv4

do you mean that this is fanfic is not harem ?

futur_hop:Hi there! Thank you for writing the very first review, I really appreciate it! Regarding the MC, he wasn't actually introduced yet. So, please, wait a little bit :) Speaking of realism, you're right. It won't be a story about an adventurer with a cheat skill that makes him level up every couple of months. Thus, don't worry about that as well :) I hope you will enjoy reading the new chapters to come!

1yr

futur_hopAuthor

You are right. I have no plans to make it harem. Cuz MC is only 8 years old :)

ThreshGasm:do you mean that this is fanfic is not harem ?

1yr

hammer_dogLv4

does it have romance ? if it is who is the love interest ?

1yr

futur_hopAuthor

It surely will have a romance line, however, I can't anything for sure since the work is at its early stage. Please, continue reading it further and I promise you that you'll see it :)

hammer_dog:does it have romance ? if it is who is the love interest ?

1yr

hammer_dogLv4

oh okay I can't wait who is the love interest I will keep reading then I hope you don't drop this book I hope you have a good day 😁

futur_hop:It surely will have a romance line, however, I can't anything for sure since the work is at its early stage. Please, continue reading it further and I promise you that you'll see it :)

1yr

VastokingLv5

is the mc reincanated, or is he originally from there

futur_hop:You are right. I have no plans to make it harem. Cuz MC is only 8 years old :)

1yr

futur_hopAuthor

He is originally from there, no reincarnations :)

Vastoking:is the mc reincanated, or is he originally from there

1yr

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