Review Detail of Adwaid_Nambiar in 刪除！

Synopsis had me thrilled! I thought that author gave away a lot of plot under synopsis, but seems like there was a lot more to the story! I really loved the gory details of the crime in the first chapter, it really was a selling point! This feels a lot like Death Note but for not the obvious reasons, a book with rules that can control your fate. And it was a new thing for me personally when it comes to transmigration. I do have few critic though. There are some punctuation errors, because of which some dialogues and sentences can feel too lengthy. But it can be easily overcome once the editing of chapters will start. And I also think that the cover does a disservice to the novel and should be worked on as most of the readers will judge the book by it and rather than the content inside it! And as there aren't much chapters yet so I feel it will be wrong to do a unnecessarily harsh critic yet, as the author still has soo much to offer! But meanwhile, I really liked the novel and will be looking forward to the upcoming chapters! Keep up the good work author!