Review Detail of DrVulgariusDogez in The Rebirth of Eli

Characters are well made, introduced, built up, and reinforced Character Design aids the personality well. No holes in the character design so far. Writing Quality is decent and easy to digest. Allows readers to use their brains in critical thinking. Details are like common ingredients but prepared well. For short, not too much but compliments with each other. Setting dynamics need tweaking tho since the plot focused to much on characters, but the background is super blurry. It is not necessary, but it might help. The pacing is perfect, nothing overflowed and nothing rushed. Cheers! Another quality author emerged. The further improvements will be up to you. If you want more educational reviews, ask an expert.