This book has potential. To start, I have seen worse written books than this one, but while reading it I did end up getting confused at timesđ”âđ«. Unfortunately, the author jumps scenes without proper breaks or transitions and I would have to re-read paragraphs just to understand whatâs happening. There is also some information that is omitted in some places. *slight spoilers ahead* Sometimes the FL would do things that have me questioning her intelligence đ. I do like the FL mostly. Sheâs silly but nice and can sometimes come across as funny. I just donât understand why she would say sheâs going to avoid tragic destiny of her character by avoiding the novelâs ML, but then she does things that will clearly lead her directly into the storyâs plot. Her decisions also seem like theyâre a spur of the moment thing. For someone who says she reads a lot of novels, she can be surprisingly dense. This is also another book where FL becomes an actress, so if youâre not into that then youâve been warned. In conclusion, the story needs some good editing. Itâs an okay read overall.
Ajaylor
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