This is an amazing book, the story flows smoothly with each chapter and so far I have no major complains/critiques, but it does not mean I don't have any. Up until the 130-ish chapters, the author spoiled the story that for me atleast ruined some of the story telling. I haven't seen much of it since then and therefore it is minor. The other minor critique is that sometimes, the plot is very cliché (Adela being tsundere, Honoria raising flags etc) although I do understand that many people still like it, I for one am not a fan of such things. But leaving all of that, and concentrating on the book itself; Good work! I will watch the development of this book with great interest :)
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