Review Detail of Adwaid_Nambiar in Disoul

I liked the story. There are some grammatical and punctuation errors that are instantly caught. The initial fight scenes get a little confusing because of the loads of imagination it takes but it's written very well. The dialogues between Asher and Tiara as they meet for the first time is written very well, I enjoyed their back and forth a lot. First major twist comes at the end of 3rd chapter which I feel is good pace for such a story. I loved the way 5th chapter started and how brilliantly was Ashers thinking process is showed in the 5th and 6th chapter. With passing chapters reader can see the research and study the author has put into this story and I totally love such intelligent pieces. I would recommend a little work on the errors but other than that I feel this novel definitely deserves attention. And keep up the good work author!