Review Detail of greyknight in Resetting Lady

Overall, the story had an interesting plot and the author's use of words were creative and artful. I loved the female MC's strong and snappy attitude. I think what made the story lose its potential is because there were too many incomplete sentences and too much of the sentences that seemed incoherent to each other. This seems to originally be a Korean novel?? If it is, then the English translation needs a lot of work. Whoever's reading this random review hi I have a novel :')