Review Detail of Masterofall1 in Custom Made Fiction God

point 1: The MC is a slave to his system. point 2: It's extremely melodramatic for no reason, other than oh I tried to be kind but I got hurt so now I'm gonna be an edgelord, who causes pain destruction, and suffering. point 3: The MC is a naive idiot who doesn't plan things out at all. point 4: It feels like because the author didn't properly think out how a shinobi world would work, he says **** it and blows up taking lord third with him, when he could have very tried to plot it to where he 'fakes' or escapes the village out when he's doing a war mission/mission, or even more so, being extremely average to the point where he fades into obscurity until he's properly strong enough. And by doing so he could properly grow stronger. Point 5: Him having to get rid of his emotions in order to 'get stronger' because emotions are apparently a human/mortal way of thinking. This fails because, how are you going to tell a proper story of a 'being' without emotions? It's impossible to do so because the author's emotions are still going to be in his or her own writing therefore the whole no emotions thing is irrelevant and unnecessary drama. Listen if you want to make a tragic/psychotic mc that does what he does because of the kindness he previously had that's fine, but if you're trying to make no emotion that's going to be hard because then you'd have to write in an extremely logical way of thinking for the mc, in which mind you this is a fantasy story.