Currently, at chapter 7 and it's enough to know I must drop this, no character building for the MC until his first battle and near-death experience, you expect us to wish for him to live like that? Talking about that moment, it's just so bad. He was excited about the fight and killing, but can't accept being in danger. He didn't even use his perks before that to grow, and you save him with BS, the higher beings have far too much importance so soon, everything smell poor righting and no, the MC is born before other fanfic doesn't make it original. Thanks and goodbye.
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How exactly would a fanfic be original. the fact that its a fanfic literally means it isnt original
What sort of character development would a 4 year old have, and for the life of me, i can’t remember writing the MC was excited about “the fight and killing but can’t accept been in danger”, where did you read that? And again the MC was 4, If you weren’t stupid, You would see the part that said he hasn’t awakened any of his “perks”. So i can’t fathom the rubbish you wrote here as a review. I don’t care about reviews but i do not enjoy somone just wantonly saying rubbish. I could delete your review but i’m too lazy to do that.
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Original from other fanfics, not from Naruto itself.
Note_Ihf:How exactly would a fanfic be original. the fact that its a fanfic literally means it isnt original
Seriously even if he doesn't have all of them he has some, I don't perfectly remember your story and don't want to read it again, but just going back a few chapters and I see a system transferring him knowledge about weapons but noooo it's not a "perks" (end of chap 2). And for where I saw he likes to fight, it's on chap 4 where he says"It's the kind of excitement I always dreamed of in my past life", but then himself admit it's stupid and he "forgot he could die on a battlefield"
Note_Ihf:What sort of character development would a 4 year old have, and for the life of me, i can’t remember writing the MC was excited about “the fight and killing but can’t accept been in danger”, where did you read that? And again the MC was 4, If you weren’t stupid, You would see the part that said he hasn’t awakened any of his “perks”. So i can’t fathom the rubbish you wrote here as a review. I don’t care about reviews but i do not enjoy somone just wantonly saying rubbish. I could delete your review but i’m too lazy to do that.
Yeah a 4yr old fighting with a sword would overpower adults in a fight after training for like a year because he was reincarnated. That makes lot of sense.
I don’t know about you, but when people get excited over something for the first time they get tunnel vission and then forget possible repercussions. That is common sense.
Just as much as a clan sending their genuis to die at 4 year old, who through it was logic? oh yes you
Note_Ihf:Yeah a 4yr old fighting with a sword would overpower adults in a fight after training for like a year because he was reincarnated. That makes lot of sense.
ok since you want to trashtalk, do you know how stupid that sound? you go from an extreme to another, they shouldn't send a powerhouse, but a kid that from the author's comment had no chance to do much, but could have become a powerhouse in the futur? Yeah let him die for nothing in this period where we need strengh. Come talk to me when you gain a sense of reason or better yet just don't talk to me.
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It’s obvious you eitter haven’t watched naruto or read this fanfic. Do you think in Naruto world they care about if you might be strong in the future?! In the warring clans era were children were forced to fight for their clans. Hashirama lost 3 of his brothers during this era, Madara lost all of them, so the weaker clan that the mc belonged to should leave him out saying ‘oh you’re talented so you won’t fight. And it was never stated that the mc couldn’t do anything, the first mission the mc went for was a somewhat easy mission that became worse. So you should just shut up because you sound very stupid. I don’t even know why the author left your comment because you probably haven’t read anything, just another internet fool thats known why typing whatever nonsense flows into your peanut brain. From your review to the entire conversation you’ve had with the author hust screams ignorance from you. Going through your comments on other novels from your profile literally confirms my thought on you ‘someone that thinks they must be right just because they said something’
Weyri:ok since you want to trashtalk, do you know how stupid that sound? you go from an extreme to another, they shouldn't send a powerhouse, but a kid that from the author's comment had no chance to do much, but could have become a powerhouse in the futur? Yeah let him die for nothing in this period where we need strengh. Come talk to me when you gain a sense of reason or better yet just don't talk to me.
You’re not, he probably thinks this is some wuxia young master thing, I don’t remember anything like he’s talented so he can’t fight, we must train him so that he can get strong, in naruto children were forces to fight regardless of talent.’
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Well I don't want to read everything again, so can you tell me if there were other children with him or if he was the only one because from what I remember he was sent because he showed them his talent which isn't smart in my opinion but okay why not. However, the author himself previously said that he had NO chance against adult, so tell me what is the use of it? And it's not wuxia BS it just logic in Naruto the strength of one person can make all the difference and in such a situation that is made to last a long time yeah it's stupid to send talented people to get killed.
Tha_Vault:You’re not, he probably thinks this is some wuxia young master thing, I don’t remember anything like he’s talented so he can’t fight, we must train him so that he can get strong, in naruto children were forces to fight regardless of talent.’
No problem, if you didn't mean it, blame on me for taking it like this.Sry
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Haven't even read and you dropped chapter 7, Ima go see if ur reasoning is valid,
so how its going?
LazyBeast:Haven't even read and you dropped chapter 7, Ima go see if ur reasoning is valid,
you right my pride would never let me lose in a internet argument
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If I'm not mistaken, Itachi went to the third great ninja war as heir to the uchiha clan when he was only 4 years old.
