Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Danmachi: Return Of The Ace (Danmachi X Plunderer)

I just cant read this. Biggest con for me is that MC will become Bell’s babysitter. I absolutely hate that crap. First time meeting him he already Says hes going to train him. And then he stalks him on his “date” with Hestia its so annoying. The way mc is acting is just so lame too. Mc is from some anime I have no idea about called Plunderer, which raises the problem of author NOT explaining the powers from that anime. So whenever mc mentions some aspects of his power or his enemy , Idk wtf hes talking about. ITS NOT EXPLAINED. Back to the way he acts...Maybe it was fine in the anime, but when you WRITE it into The fanfiction its just so cringe and makes him seem pathetic. Mc decides that to hide his identiy or to not seem suspicious. POINTLESS cuz Hermes somehow ALREADY knows who tf he is before he even arrives. hes going to act like a loser perv he decides. First thing he does when he gets to the city is peep on the goddess bath. Freya sees him getting beat up and finds his soul unique. His not being suspicious thing is already going badly. Next he goes to the popular restaurant and starts acting like a sissy loser in front of the owner. Getting scared of her like some Japanese beta. Shaking in fear and saying “yes mam” while stuttering. Now comes the scene of canon when Bell gets made fun of for Ais saving him. MC doesnt want to be noticed and not seem suspicious. What does he do? Before bell runs away he gets infront of him using the speed of a LEVEL 9 apparently according to the chapter. Shocking ALL of the Loki family. Uses his aura to make Bete unconscious. so much for not being suspicious ????? His plan is already failing so he should stop acting like such a loser right? Nope... doesnt happen PLEASE get rid of this pathetic loser act. Its not funny its just frustrating to read. Author tries to make it funny but its just not. Mc looks under girls skirts and gets beat up. Hes just a weirdo. Borderline issei in terms of patheticness I wondered why this fanfic was so god damn Cringe and then i found out author also post on Wattpad. It explained so much.