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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv51yr
2023-10-29 07:58

I dropped it at chapter 30. Not because the story wasn't good, I kind of felt it was getting better and better and the story progressed and even at the start the concept was interesting and good. Also the grammar was without any problems I could spot. The reason I dropped it is because the plots were kind of forced with and without any rhythm. But mainly what annoyed me was that the MC was acting so childish it was getting ridiculous. For example someone taunts him a little and he's already getting so mad he's ready to risk his life or getting expelled after just one or two sentences like he is a third-rate villain in a movie... Or even though he is already 40+ years old (counting just the years he lived in bleach AU) he is it still blushing like a little kid after getting teased, like come on!! Writing quality - 5 stars. Updating stability - 5 stars. Story development - 1 stars. Character design - 1 stars. World background - 5 stars.

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someRandomMob
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a true review, don't forget that guy waste his time for 100 years and do nothing and as the time to the hueco mundo arc approaches he started to plan ...... and then Abandoned that plan a few chapters later lmao this author was fvking high when he probably writes these.

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