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DaoistosrKh6
DaoistosrKh6Lv41yr
2023-02-03 22:14

Hope next time you make the mc more intelligent , no one like stupid, annoying mc in fanfiction

Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi

nyawdao
4.3
340 Chs

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CouchPotatoDandy
CouchPotatoDandyLv5

Exactly!! The MC childish character is so annoying and frustrating to read...

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AllSeeingMystery
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Good story and beginning! Continue writing, you’re doing great! 👍 Romance? - I hope you can pair him with Unohana Retsu 😏🙏 Add to my library - ✅

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nyawdao
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An otaku found himself stranded in a dense forest, which turns out to be part of Soul Society. Yes, the Soul Society in the anime that he once watched, Bleach. But... he doesn't have any cheat! How does he plan to fight the enemies like Aizen or Yhwach in the future? Give it a read to find out!

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CruelReality
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The novel is quite good until chapter 77. Around chapter 77 we have a time skip and it is revealed that the MCs skills have regressed over the last 10+ years because he did like no training and combat. On top of that he has the nerve to worry about saving his friends and to be stressed even though he has literally gotten weaker because he spent his time messing around. Him wasting his time randomly is inconsistent with his character, and makes no sense considering his supposed goal was to survive with his own strength. On top of this the grammar takes a nosedive after chapter 77 and it becomes machine translation type bad with improper use of genders and plurals. Really disappointing to see an otherwise good story absolutely run into the ground.

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Starrockzz
StarrockzzLv4

Tbh i was avoiding this for a while then i got bored looking for new things. So I searched up Bleach And Found this im not regretting it at all and compared to the Other stuff i read i would place this in top 5

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Akkikuro
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NobleKei
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RIP English, I'm out. Plus it's a cchinese novel, I've had enough of that stuff already. I need to complete the min word countttttttttttttttt

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TheKonnan17
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GodErebos
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Grammer is bad The plot is the same in the way that the mc's IQ drops to 1 and he wastes 100 years each time for the plot to continue in total (till chapter 130) he wastes 200 years then remembers he needs to train (also bad timing for big time skips) very very annoying OC that clings to him Mc could literally finish everything yet his IQ dropped or he holds back or something else every time pretty much a cycle that happens every time which is very frustrating it's better to watch bleach as nothing will change anyway.

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