God, I hate stories where the MC is turned into a system then the entire story is about literally babysitting some incompetent idiot. Why can't we get a system which works for itself and isnt a edge lord?
PattyBu
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MÖGENThank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
I appreciate it that you didn't start cussing as most would do. And I'll definitely check out your other novel.
PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.
Autor-san o mc vai ter um host um pouco mais inteligente e divertido? quero saber isso para ver se devo seguir ou não, afinal não gosto muito de hosts que são sonso, etc.
PattyBu:Thank you for your feedback on the first. The system will, indeed, evolve. The story is a little slow, but it will get there in time. It's fine if you want to drop it. I have another novel : I become 7 Different Persons This one's plot might appeal to you. Thank you for taking the time to read this.