Item: The sarcastic heart
Rating: 4.8

Raksha1Lv123yr

2021-07-21 18:43

The story's premise is good and the beginning was funny and lighthearted. It might get a bit confusing to read due to the lack of "" signaling the dialogue, and some mistakes in the English. But I believe all that can be corrected at the editing phase, so I won't use it as a criteria for evaluation. So far, the characters seemed human, with some relatable likes, dislikes and overall behavior. I hope the author will continue to work hard and make the story even better as she goes 🥰 Good luck!

The sarcastic heart

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